He was inaugurating the new store. He had said 8 o'clock. She was breathless with excitement and love. She had worn his favourite color.
Few minutes more ,he would be home, to pick her up, so she switched on the television. Smiling bright and happily, on the screen she saw, he was cutting the red ribbon...
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This is done as a part of a week long 55-word fiction attempt along with Marathon bloggers
8 comments:
Ouch! Love for someone else, I see! That must have hurt! Nice take!
wow..didn't see this coming...lovely! :-)
Whoa... this is beautiful...
kahaani mein towwist?!
sigh!
Aw... That must've hurt!
Thanks Shailaja
Uma.. Most things in a relationship are surprises.
Meeta : Thanks
Mama-Mia ... Sigh
Tulips Singh.... It does, always
good writing!!
whoa... twist hai bada walla :D
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