Monday, January 20, 2014

Is it love?

He was inaugurating the new store. He had said 8 o'clock. She was breathless with excitement and love. She had worn his favourite color.
Few minutes more ,he would be home, to pick her up, so she switched on the television. Smiling bright and happily, on the screen she saw, he was cutting the red ribbon...

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  This is done as a part of a week long 55-word fiction attempt along with Marathon bloggers 

8 comments:

Shailaja V said...

Ouch! Love for someone else, I see! That must have hurt! Nice take!

Uma said...

wow..didn't see this coming...lovely! :-)

Meeta Sengupta said...

Whoa... this is beautiful...

Mama - Mia said...

kahaani mein towwist?!

sigh!

tulika singh said...

Aw... That must've hurt!

Prats said...

Thanks Shailaja

Uma.. Most things in a relationship are surprises.

Meeta : Thanks

Mama-Mia ... Sigh

Tulips Singh.... It does, always

Pushpa Moorjani said...

good writing!!

monikamanchanda said...

whoa... twist hai bada walla :D