He rotated around
All ignorant
Looked always
In the same direction
Round and round
he went profound.
The big ball of fire
Was all he could keep in count
Not counting the days
nor the months in which he spun
Smiling all round through
Turn and turn but he still wasn't done.
Far far away
many bodies apart
It does look rainbow coloured
Is it the Earth?
or is my insides torn apart?
Yes, the Earth it was
and there many a scribes spent
Days and years..
long , long ago.
They said it was the position:
and some said it wasn't.
But down it went,
Into the palmyra strips
The manuscripts were written
The verdict was given
Seven and half years of evil
and some more or be ill
Thats all she had heard
All through ,kept pondering
Why should the planets
be the reason for her shortcomings?
Just for Sunday scribblings
9 comments:
Cleverly done! Enjoyed it immensely...
most assuredly
WDS...
well you know that the "dumd" and "helpless" is the only one in a group who is blamed for all miseries...
in this case dear planets...
well written
hey prats, this was cool. loved this new site btw...
Hello fellow Libran. Thanks for visiting. Maybe the world could benefit from some 'Venus Verses' ...
Satanic Verses? clever :)
@tumblewords, wine dark Thank you
@ceedy Planets somehow are always revolving around us 'cos of horoscopes and stuff....Thanks for coming in here
@ul Gee thanks. Keep dropping in
@elspeth Welcome here....Yes, hopefully not overdosed with Venus sweetness...heheh
@rebecca...Saturn....isn't it how that is?
planetary talk always follows our every action doesn't it?
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