Monday, June 9, 2008

Cherish the nights!

The inky blue darkness
descended on me
It was time to let go
and blend into the fading lights.

It was the time to forgive
the moments of the day
and then who could say
what in the next few hours lay?

It took me long moments
To unwind
Thoughts, and fears out aside
Welcoming the beauty of the night

What should I make
for breakfast and later
Will he come early tonight
Or later than ever?

Read through the crawling words
of the fairytale and heroes
Eyes drooped into a close
Till I could think no more.

Sleep, beauty soul
Think not what lies ahead
Cherish the wonders
you've been gifted instead.


Anonymous said...

Beautifully written.

Preethi said...


gautami tripathy said...

Oh, I do try..



Tammie Lee said...

ah, this is wonderful.

--xh-- said...

nice.. well put words... (me too want to sleep now.. :( )

Prats said...

@ anon, preethi thanks

@gautami...its always better to try before we give up altogether...thanks

@tammie lee...thank you..

@xh thanks...and i'm sure its the work thats stopping you :D

Krappy Genius said...

wish optism flowed in my blood the way it flows in urs :-)

ceedy said...

It is nice....just one question tho....why think of breakfast and take the stress of the next day when you are unwinding :(

Meghna said...

Lovely and entrancing....

Arunima said...

very nice! I don't know a thing about poetry. I just bloody can't rhyme.

rantravereflect/ jane said...

what should i make for breakfast... :) heee. i'm always tink 'what am i gonan hog for breakfast!'
loved the way ya have written it babe :)
n yehhh, 'Cherish the wondersyou've been gifted instead." very profound :)

Compassion Unlimitted said...

Very nicely done..Dreams after hearing the fairy tales allow ones imagination to run wild and allows the persons thought process a great deal,as they grow up.well written

Bla said...

Absolutely. :)

Anonymous said...

it is beautiful Prats!

♪♪HARINI♪♪ said...

hey amazing writing...
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PrAcHi said...

Nice pic as well...

Aarthi said...

"and then who could say
what in the next few hours lay?" wooowww true...a poem with a simple concept but makes one think really deep...:)

Rahul S. Nair said...

that was a beautiful poem.
very expressive...
great penning of emotions..

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

Awesome :-)
I love the last stanza :-)

Arjun said...

you're an optimist. Nice!!

Kay said...

I loved this... it was like you were sitting beside me yesterday morning and writing exactly what I was feeling better than I could ever have written it myself.

thank you

Priyaa said...

u said it right...I know m really to comment...thinking about "next" is wasting the present...i know coz i have done it !! Well written...beautifully expressed :) :)

Priyaa said...

u said it right....thinking about the "next" is wasting the present moment...i know it coz i hv done it:( ....well written , beautifully expressed :) :)