The inky blue darkness
descended on me
It was time to let go
and blend into the fading lights.
It was the time to forgive
the moments of the day
and then who could say
what in the next few hours lay?
It took me long moments
To unwind
Thoughts, and fears out aside
Welcoming the beauty of the night
What should I make
for breakfast and later
Will he come early tonight
Or later than ever?
Read through the crawling words
of the fairytale and heroes
Eyes drooped into a close
Till I could think no more.
Sleep, beauty soul
Think not what lies ahead
Cherish the wonders
you've been gifted instead.
23 comments:
Beautifully written.
lovely!!!
Oh, I do try..
:D
nocturnal
ah, this is wonderful.
nice.. well put words... (me too want to sleep now.. :( )
@ anon, preethi thanks
@gautami...its always better to try before we give up altogether...thanks
@tammie lee...thank you..
@xh thanks...and i'm sure its the work thats stopping you :D
wish optism flowed in my blood the way it flows in urs :-)
It is nice....just one question tho....why think of breakfast and take the stress of the next day when you are unwinding :(
Lovely and entrancing....
very nice! I don't know a thing about poetry. I just bloody can't rhyme.
what should i make for breakfast... :) heee. i'm always tink 'what am i gonan hog for breakfast!'
;);)
loved the way ya have written it babe :)
n yehhh, 'Cherish the wondersyou've been gifted instead." very profound :)
Very nicely done..Dreams after hearing the fairy tales allow ones imagination to run wild and allows the persons thought process a great deal,as they grow up.well written
TC
CU
Absolutely. :)
it is beautiful Prats!
hey amazing writing...
chk out my blog too when you can
Beautiful!
Nice pic as well...
"and then who could say
what in the next few hours lay?" wooowww true...a poem with a simple concept but makes one think really deep...:)
that was a beautiful poem.
very expressive...
great penning of emotions..
Awesome :-)
I love the last stanza :-)
you're an optimist. Nice!!
I loved this... it was like you were sitting beside me yesterday morning and writing exactly what I was feeling better than I could ever have written it myself.
thank you
u said it right...I know m really to comment...thinking about "next" is wasting the present...i know coz i have done it !! Well written...beautifully expressed :) :)
u said it right....thinking about the "next" is wasting the present moment...i know it coz i hv done it:( ....well written , beautifully expressed :) :)
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