Sunday, December 14, 2008
The tears welled up...
When the world conspires to pull them down
the lil fingers reach out
they reach out to the hand
the one they know
will pull them up
They hope for the smile
the smile that will lift their spirits up
from the upsets that they faced
the hopeful beginnings
that threaten to cloud their happy tracks
Old order changeth
bringing in the new
unseen as it may seem,
it gets better as it ages
new replaces old, but never to hold
just plain cold.
The hand stretched out
slowly drawn back-
the hand , larger and stronger
holds back,knowing not how
The tears , welled, behind the lids
were the dreams and hopes
of a smaller hand
precious, raw
unexposed to the laws of the land.
Labels:
children,
disappointment,
sadness
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11 comments:
beautiful.
awww prats, this was so so beautiful...and so very sad too :(
wow... one of the best poems i read lately.. so beautiful
beautifully captured emotion...
I wonder...is it from some old memory..
**unexposed to the laws of the land.**
Thanks for stopping by my blog and I do hope you come by again.I love your blog and your template and your poems are just so awesome.
Innocence exemplified.....loved it...have you read "little prince"? - you will like it for sure
A good one..slightly heavy here & there, but I felt there was lot of Hope in it
TC
CU
wish you a happy pongal
tc
cu
simply beautiful..
A really good one :)
the story of conditioning, so to say...sad, yet true.
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