Thursday, January 23, 2014

Kissed, oh! So tenderly!

Stark white, fresh green, dewy petals. Struggling to open.
The diluted rays of the morning sun
Sashaying across the sky
Leisurely, with no purpose
Sweeps down , planting a tender kiss
And the shy petals blush in wide surprise

This was in response to the prompt 'That tender kiss' at 'Marathon Bloggers' a week long attempt at doing a 55 word story


Mama - Mia said...


Reminded of the song pyaar hua chupke se from 1947 a love story!

Pallavi Purani said...

Just like Abha this one reminded me of Mere ghar ayi ek nanhi kali. Beautiful

Uma said...

How romantic! loved this, Prats..:-)

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