Friday, April 4, 2008

Life!

Mysterious calls
late into the night
Silent words,
unfinished tasks
Springly bounce
to the joyous feet.
Parallel lives
Words left unsaid.


My first time at 3WW. Would love to hear what you'll have to say.

7 comments:

Greyscale Territory said...

Love how the poem captures threads of images!

Nice write!

Gemma

TC said...

This was so sad to me. You can feel the surrounding and paralyzing idea of infidelity in the air.

pia said...

Mysterious calls do leave words unsaid

Great imagery

tumblewords said...

You've certainly written this situation in vivid imagery! Nice work!

Prats said...

@gemma Thankyou and nice having you out here..

@tc Isn't that what infidelity is all about...sadness for both. Guilt and regrets. Thanks for dropping in here...keep coming over.

@pia welcome here Pia. Thank you.
Mystery is about so many unsaid things...and it sure can bring a lot of suspense in life

@tumblewords Thank you.

Devil Mood said...

I'm so inspired by the image on the background that I can't keep my eyes off it. :)
I like this idea of the 3WW and you truly created an interrupted poem, there's a definite bounce there :)

Prats said...

@devilmood Thanks and i'm so happy you liked the background....